Untouchable

by Billy on December 21, 2011

The world seems lost to me;
I’m on it’s very edge.
I shield my eyes.
The first rays steal the horizon,
sea of sand between us.

Heat pulses, dunes shift,
the Shimmers dance;
they rise, they fade away.

Body screams rebellion;
another day in hell?
The heat gathers in the sand,
baking all that dares upon it.
Merciless.

The wind calls;
another conspirator
laughing at my death.
Carrion circle, waiting for the fall.

Not today.
My legs remember now,
their stride slowly returns.
I rise up from my fear,
untouchable once again.

-Billy

This week’s Indie Ink Challenge came from Sunshine at Awesome Title Here,  she gave me this prompt: You’re in a funk; how do you get out of it?

I challenged Gráinne Ní Mháille at The Grace of Pirates with the prompt: You’re sitting in a diner by yourself, all around you are the noises of other people’s busyness; for them the world is spinning ‘round, for you it’s standing still. Tell us your story.

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  • http://twitter.com/otncooper cooper

    A grabber Billy. The visions …..

  • http://frommywriteside.wordpress.com/ SAM

    This is the first time I have seen your poetry, and it’s gorgeous. I love the way this flows and what it says. It’s just wonderful

  • Bluebird

    Bluebird:  Haunting, but at the same time celebrating the strength and tenacity of the human spirit.  As below, the imagery paints a picture so clearly in the mind.

  • http://epitaphforaheart.wordpress.com/ risha

    Stunning images, Billy. I especially loved this: 
    ‘The wind calls;another conspirator
    laughing at my death.
    Carrion circle, waiting for the fall.Not today.’
    I often tell myself that when I feel as though my world is about to collapse around my ears.. ‘Not today’. It gets me through the day, a mantra that heats my palm. I hope you’re having a fantastic holiday season. x

  • http://thinspiralnotebook.wordpress.com/ Tara R.

    Very good! I really like the imagery of the Shimmers Dance too.

  • Anonymous

    This is incredibly lovely – Beautiful imagery.  I love the Shimmers on the sand.  Perfect.  

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